Сочинение / Каникулы (на англ.) - страница 16

2 предложение Each month we should pay дальше правильно

3 предложение every month лучше поставить в конец или в начало, и я бы написала to a post office

4 предложение не нужно писать a few days, before New Year members of my family buy gifts/presents to each other and to their/our friends.  Следующее предложение я бы убрала вообще, оно составлено неправильно. Нужно написать так: Of course, it takes a lot of money to buy new year's presents, but smiles of our relatives and friends are more important than money. 

6 предложение On summer vacations дальше правильно, можно добавить of interest

7 предложение holidays 

8 предложение составлено правильно  

Warm September, more like summer flew by. In late October, when everything finally came into the school rhythm, somehow suddenly come autumn vacation. Without thinking, my parents decided to send us to the whole class in backpacking.
Until we reached the outskirts of the city bus. Backpacks and tents dismantled and moved to the woods. The day was very warm, almost windless. Turning to the side of the road to the forest trail, we roared loudly and in unison marching song.
Autumn forest greeted us wary silence. Usually at this time of the year visitors to the woods a little. Is that wander some avid mushroom hunter. And then the whole crowd, and even a noisy
Short autumn vacation drawing our hearts in unison. We became good friends, sincere, tolerant towards each other.
The last bell rang, and we go to the school yard each to his own life. But autumn forest forever retain our children’s dreams.

 How I spent my fall vacation! it was fun, I went for a walk with her friends at the park and ride on a swing. evening I went to my grandmother on mamainoy side. She lives in the country I love her very much. my Grandma can bake vkustnye cakes, cookies, pancakes. I have known my grandmother all my close friends. I liked it!                               как я провела осенние каникулы ! Это было весело я гуляла со своими подругами в парке и каталась на качелях. Вечером я уехала к свой бабушке по мамаиной стороне. Она живет в деревне я ее очень люблю. Моя бабуша умеет печь вкустные пироги, печенья, блины. Я и моя бабушка познали всех своих близких подруг. Мне очень понравилось! Вам может быть не понравиться но я так провела свои осенние каникулы это мой текст 

I had an Autumn holiday! It was not very long, but  I had a rest. I met with my friends. We walked together every day if the weather was fine. We walked in the park or in the street. If it was rainy and cold we went to a café and eat pizza with juice.  One day  I went to the cinema with my best friend. We watched a horror film “Silent Hill”.  It was about a girl who looked for her father in Silent hill. It was a very creepy film.  I liked it. In the evening I played  computer games or listened  to music or read a book. I read a book about anorexia; one girl didn’t eat anything and got ill. At weekend I visited  my grandparents with my parents. I helped my grandmother to cook dinner. We had a very tasty dinner. After dinner we saw old photos of my family. It is always interesting for me to find  out something interesting about my relatives.  I liked my holiday very much because I did everything I wanted.

   Now I want to tell you about my holidays. I was very happy to have holidays!  The weather was fine so my friends and I went for a walk every day. It was fun! We went to the cinema and to the swimming pool. Then I spent a few days in the country where my grandfather and grandmother live. It was great. I drank milk and ate a lot of tasty food which my granny prepared for me. I have many friends in this village because I go there every holidays. We played tennis every day! We went to the forest to gather mushrooms or just for a walk. When the weather was rainy and windy I played computer games and watched TV. But  holidays were over and I returned to the city again.  I liked my holidays very much, but I love to go to school too. 

I love autumn for its bad weather and cold winds. But once I got on the nature of the fall, and I realized that this is a very beautiful time of the year. Moreover, a special beauty, unlike the spring, when everything is awakening. I rarely manage to be in the forest in autumn, but this year a classmate invited to spend the holidays with his family in the village. We had fun together, and helping with household chores more convenient.
One day we went out with friends in the woods for mushrooms. At this time, you can catch russula, mushrooms, aspen. Generally, mushroom pickers love autumn for rich harvests. We more or less learned to distinguish fungi and showed them how to cut, and then we were armed with sticks and went. Fungi was full! I quickly dialed the package, but also quickly became clear that they are inedible. And one edible was so battered that it does not have to put in the general trash. That’s how I found out that the mushrooms are added only in the basket - where they do not crumple.
I walked through the woods and thought that in the city, we never feel the smells, do not see so many colors in the trees, do not hear the different sounds of the forest. All this is in harmony with each other. Sorry, the camera did not take with him, though not before it would have happened. And in the end, as we walked home, we jumped right under the feet of the protein. We were trying to come closer to her to take a picture, but she was scared and ran away

there are many holidays in our country/They are; new year day, cristmas, women’s day or the 8th of March. I like New Year’s Day most of all. It’s my favorute holiday. The first og January is on winter holidays and it is the first day of New Year. I don’t go to school and my parents don’t go to work. the first of Juanuary is the middle of winter. the weather is usually fine and there is a lot of snow everywhere.

Our family prepares for New Year holiday beforehand. My father buys and brings home a beaituful New Year tree at the end of December. Our family has a tradition to decorate it  every year with toys, little coloured lights, sweets and the beautiful star on the top.

It’s a pleasant moment to get presents on New Year’s Day

Наконец наступили осенние каникулы! Я была очень счастлива!  Я не должна была вставать рано утром ни свет ни заря и бежать в школу. Я могла  оставаться в постели до полудня. Но спать, как всегда в каникулы, совершенно не хотелось.   Погода была хорошая, так что поначалу мы с друзьями  ходили в парк почти каждый день. Это было весело! Я так мечтала провести неделю в деревне, где  живут мои дедушка и бабушка. Это было здорово. Я пила парное молоко и ела много вкусностей, которые моя бабушка всегда готовит для меня, когда я приезжаю к ней в гости. У меня много друзей в этой деревне, потому что я езжу туда каждые каникулы. Но у мамы с папой что-то не сложилось, и меня оставили дома. Погода испортилась. Откуда-то налетел ветер, дождь, было сыро, и не хотелось высовывать нос из теплого гнездышка.  Конечно, было немножко грустно, сидеть в городской квартире, заниматься вечными домашними делами, но что делать?  Помогать маме тоже нужно. Каникулы пролетели очень быстро, я даже не успела соскучиться по одноклассникам и учителям. Снова в школу.

I dare not say that I spent the day  vain. For the first time I had a rest day  after hard working. So, my brain needed to have a rest. After I visited my grandmother, because I haven’t seen her for a long time. I helped her in garden. Of course, I helped to gather juicy apples. The weather was cloudy. But anyway I was happy because I was with my I was with my loved ones.

I am not ashamed to say that I did not open even one page of books, but I spent the holidays in this way that I wanted. There were unrepeatabledays for me нуу) надеюсь сойдет)

I waited autumn holidays from first of September. They started very funny. I entangled a trolleybus and rode in a place that I didn’t know before that moment. There I walked about 10 minutes because I didn’t want to go back. Suddenly, I saw my old friend that I didn’t see during 2 years. We were really happy to met each other. So we had all day together. And now we became best friends again. My next holidays were great: I went to the cinema 2 times and often walked with friends. It was amazing autumn holidays in which I found my old friend!

                                       AsI spend theautumn holiday
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